Bad poetry...a short free verse?

Dannie Briseno: Bad because the logic seems illogical or bad because the flow is choppy or bad because you said it was? Don't know if I can follow this although I did like some images and rhymes.

Lita Thammorongsa: I consider this a good example of what is called "abstract" poetry.Frpm:http://www.wisegeek.com/what-is-abstract-poetry.ht...(((Abstract poetry, as the name suggests, is poetry that does not lend itself to a literal, or concrete, interpretation. Often the words are chosen more for their sounds than for their meanings, in the same way that abstract visual art is often more about color and shape than about creating representational images. This kind of abstract poetry is also known as sound poetry. In a broader sense, abstract poetry is poetry that employs random images, stream-of-consciousness, and other abstract art techniques. Although not for all tastes, this kind of poetry can create memorable aesthetic experiences..................................)))! I consider it elegant, with the words playing-jumping around, like drops of rain that nicely fall on the surface of a pond. I suggest to all of the readers to comprehend the "reasoning" of "abstract" poetry....Show more

Robbie Starchman: I was confused but read it over 3 times and found some understanding.This is where I wanted to linger longerSide walk chalk and the sand box stains from grass always greener childrens games...Show more

Nikita Schroepfer: MTR 2.0Well.....1. This is either bad poetry because it truly is2. Is bad poetry because you say so3. Is bad poetry because we say so4. You are using reverse psychology on us and some of us say it is good poetry5. Is a little bit of bothI did not get the poem at all, but your poetry, even the intentionally bad stuff, does intrigue me because you are working at it being bad. Consequently, there are some pertinent lines and this is like one of those movies can it so bad it eventually gets the reputation of b! eing a good poem >>>>>>>>>>>do keep at it, and you may succeed! .favorite line: "Brandish a bandit rosary" (wth does that mean) -- 'heck'Congrats________________________________________________________________...Show more

Bruno Galasso: Not all that manic about following something which makes itself unknown.